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Chapter III : The dark streets of East Anglia

Further to last week's posts of horror, nannyo asked me for a filleting of the Darkness-inspired vampire fic (from, of course, the same girl). I therefore present it for you - but I feel that, somehow, I'm doing the world a disfavour by focusing so much on just this one girl when there's so much other toss out there. I therefore give you the 'books' section of Fanfiction.net (where the stupid comes from). If you're enjoying all this, please choose a fandom and I shall dive in and scathe. ~g~

If you're at home crying "Please, please stop this, it hurts", do tell me. I know I could be the only one deriving any amusement from this.

Still NSFW. But much shorter, this time.


From : First Taste
Summary : Justin and Dan Hawkins own a music store. They catch the eye of the town’s local vampire Ed Graham

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"I hate owing that place," Justin sighed.
"Me too, but it pays the bills," Dan replied.

*

Ed Graham had walked in the door of the pub. His ebony hair fell in feathery layers down to his shoulders. His dark eyes were full of fire and passion, hinted with just a touch of gold. His pink lips were curled into a somewhat evil smirk. Just a hint of pointed white fangs were visible.

*

"You're about to be mine," Ed said.
With the sharp nail on his left index finger, he slashed his right wrist. Ruby blood began to spill. He pressed his wrist up to Dan's mouth and said,
"Drink from me and live forever."
Dan slurped up Ed's ruby blood.

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Ed helped his new pet back to his castle, hidden deep in East Anglia. Soon, that golden hair brother of his would be Ed's as well.

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Summary: Ed takes his pet for his first kil

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Dan felt a strange feeling inside his stomach. A sad look crossed his face.

*

Ed led Dan down the dark streets of East Anglia

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"My, my, you are certainly the most rambunctious of my pets," Ed said.
"Can’t help it, this sucking blood thing really turned me on," Dan replied.

*

Warning there is het in this fic!!!

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He heard a muffled female voice behind an emerald colored door. He smiled, everything inside him wanted to check it out.
He pushed the heavy door open and walked in. A women sitting on the floor turned and looked at him, her eyes wide.
"Who are you?" she asked, her green eyes wide with fear.

*

Annabella switched off her T.V. and Dan sat down next to her. She was so pale. Like freshly fallen snow, and her green eyes glowed like a predatory cat’s. He could see why Ed liked her so much. His dark eyes were drawn to her body, which was clothed in a sheer white dress. Just a hint of rosy pink nipples were visible beneath her frock.
Her lips were formed in a slight pout. They were a bloodless pink, and her hair was thick, long, and dark. She almost reminded him of a ghost.

*

Dan sucked on that sugary ruby blood. He pulled away and the ruby liquid dripped down her lips. Those once pink bloodless lips were now full and crimson. Those lips made her skin even paler and those eyes more eerie and evil
"Fuck me," she whispered.

*

He teased her with his cock, before slipping it in. Even her core was colder than death.

*

Ed's two naked pets followed him into his room. Ed’s room was decorated in dark ebony and deep blood reds. Very gothic. A pair of manacles was attached to the wall. Dan was getting a bad feeling.

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Shivers traveled throughout the young vampire’s body.
The first smack caught Dan off guard. Ed certainly packed a packed a powerful wallop.

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He began to knead Dan’s burning flesh, electing deep moans from his pet’s mouth. A finger teased Dan’s crack, dipping in and out.
"Now, my pet, let’s get some blood into you," Ed purred.
Dan whimpered and Annabella was pissed. It was no secret that Dan was now Ed’s favorite. She used to be his favorite. It didn’t matter. She would get him her revenge.

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Sorry, but this is just a short chapter.

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Oh, and my favourite stray line from one of her other, very short fics :
"Dan was attracted to him. He was gorgeous and warm. Well, actually cold."

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